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What We Offer...
 The BEST DEAL for getting your
book manuscript critiqued: 
for the price of one!
Who We Are...

We are authors just like you who have benefited greatly from the many critiques of our own manuscripts over the years.

We hope that the advice we offer through

Two-4-One Kid Critiques

will serve you well in your writing endeavors.



What We Critique...

Picture Books
Easy Readers
Early Chapter Books
Middle Grade Novels
Young Adult Novels

    See our RATES page for specifics.



"Having Gloria and Jean as a resource has become a critical step in my writing process. I have hired them to critique manuscripts I’ve considered submitting to an agent or editor. Their attention to detail, ideas, and suggestions help push my story in ways that I hadn’t thought of. Anyone looking to improve their writing definitely should consider hiring Gloria and Jean before sending out any work."

                                                                                                                     ~Lori Himmel, children's writer

"I have been critiqued before, but your work is like a Haagen Dazs. Really premium level (without the calories)!"

                                                                                                             ~Mitchell W., author

"I highly recommend Two For One Kid Critiques. I’ve sent several manuscripts to Jean and Gloria and hope to send them more soon. While I’m not yet published, I’ve learned so much from them. I find it especially helpful having both their individual insight as well as a joint critique. They’re critiques always leave me thinking and usually result in my writing a stronger next draft. Their critiques are not only thoughtful and thorough, but Jean and Gloria almost always send them back ahead of schedule! And their rates are quite reasonable."

                                                                                                             ~Karen Carson, children' writer



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